Monday, November 5, 2018
dogs make a better pet than cats
Dogs, their noses can smell the sweat of somebody faraway even blood to add, while cats have whiskers to sense anything coming from the back and front.Dogs and cats are equally shared, some like dogs the others cats but, for me I'm gonna choose the dogs this time, they are hard to keep care of and looking after them but that's what makes it so fun, they are hard work but at the end you know they're are always loyal to you and so energetic to play around and plus they will never ditch you or try to be bossy.
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Note: Only a member of this blog may post a comment.
Subscribe to:
Post Comments (Atom)
Hello Sammy its me Ruby C
ReplyDeleteI read your dog vs cats, I agree with you that dogs do make good buddies to have, to have someone lick your face in the morning, and get a nice greet each day, But I would have to side with the cat side since, I love cats, but I also like dogs just mot as much as cats, as they are not much to deal with and they can don't need to do walks as in I don't like walking.
What I think you can try to do is add some full spots. After that everything is perfectly fine.
Great feedback from Ruby C, and I agree that you could have some more full stops in your piece.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the descriptive words you chose to add detail such as energetic and loyal. This made your piece stand out.
Commendable job, Sammy!
- Miss Birtch